Formal English - 10 points to correct and think about

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2. some points which I think are not true[m2] in your article
3. I would like to draw up your attentionü [to…..] [m3] in order to voiceü my disappointment with the article publishedü in the local newspaper recently
4. must disagree[m4] whith your version of events
Dear Sir,
6. My name is Joseph Martin Smith[m6] and I am a member of the
8. If you want[m8] we are going to be very proud to share with you these information
10. it was really disappointingü the way you critic[m10] our event

[m2]Much too strong

[m3]You need an object.

[m4]OK; as longas you want to sound angry


[m6]Please Ask.

[m7]I think the newspaper is more justified to call their lawyers!


[m9]Not very friendly!

[m10]WO/G – a shame as that’s a very nice first para-

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